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  • The poem spot

    (Could possibly trig)

    It was suggest to have a thread for poems to keep the place a little tidier. So here it is, feel free to add to it and let ur creative side out, from one line to a billion.

    Theres also a trig warning, just incase

  • #2
    Do not ask me to remember.

    Do not ask me to remember.
    Do not try to make me understand.
    Let me rest and know you're with me.
    Kiss my cheek and hold my hand.
    I'm confused beyond your concept.
    I am sad and sick and lost.
    All that I know is that I need you to be with me at all cost.
    Do not lose your patience with me.
    Do not scold or curse my cry.
    I cant help the way I am acting.
    Cant be different though I try.
    Just remember that I need you.
    That the best of me is gone.
    Please dont fail to stand beside me,
    Love me till my life is done.
    You are enough


    • #3
      Love that poem Lostsense
      And you know we'll always be there for you and never try to change you.

      Anyway, here's mine
      SUCCESS is not final, FAILURE is not fatal; it is the courage to continue that counts


      • #4
        Eulogy for the living
        By me

        You think heís smiling but heís lying.
        That heís laughing: itís not true.
        But you canít blame him for his trying,
        After all that heís been through.

        You see the cuts along his skin?
        They tell a story of their own.
        But thereís no way to even begin
        To get his concept of Ďaloneí.

        His heart is broken but itís beating.
        His bedís his home all day and night.
        Any hope he has is fleeting,
        Of ever living in the light.

        If you think that youíve been there,
        That you have seen it all.
        No, I guess that life is not fair,
        But youíre not alone at all.

        Some people have it better,
        And some others have it worse.
        But if weíre there for each other,
        Then each other, we can nurse.

        Live life in just this moment new,
        Donít even think about the past.
        The pain that youíve always been through,
        Will comfort you at last.
        SUCCESS is not final, FAILURE is not fatal; it is the courage to continue that counts


        • #5
          we crave the earth beneath our feet,
          lusting over the vines that climb up our ankles
          like ivy laced ballet ribbons.
          we dance in the passing of winter to spring.
          our bones kissed by the sun,
          fading the frost lingering under our skin.

          we stand under showers of nostalgia,
          no witnesses to the silence of fireflies flickering in front of our eyes.
          we fear the dark.
          but under the comfort of mother nature;
          together we grow.
          - habitual.
          Last edited by ellaleftwonderland; 02-05-2017, 08:34 AM.
          love, me


          • #6
            I feel like that one's an extended metaphor for something, but it's too complicated for me to understand haha. Must mean it's good!!
            SUCCESS is not final, FAILURE is not fatal; it is the courage to continue that counts


            • #7
              This is one I wrote for my girlfriend. I don't claim to be good at poetry, but if this was absolutely terrible she would have loved it anyway. Saying that, pretty sure it is absolutely terrible

              Its 3 AM and Iím still awake,
              With thoughts in my head I just canít shake.
              Thereís a girl hundreds of miles away,
              But my heart really needs her to stay.

              She thinks Iím funny, well she is too,
              The hardest times, sheís got me through.
              Of all the people Iíve ever known,
              Sheís the most human, she takes the throne.

              The reason I love her as I do,
              Is she does something I could never do.
              She knows my flaws and she doesnít care,
              I think sheíd love me anywhere.

              Iíve lived too long inside this shell,
              But it wasnít just my personal hell.
              Part of her was in here too,
              Without her with me, I couldnít do.

              She loves that Iím soppy,
              And loves how Iím rude,
              She makes me so happy,
              She lifts my whole mood.

              I wonít say I love her,
              It wouldnít be fair,
              To make her stay with me,
              When sheís better off elsewhere.

              But I canít live without her,
              I canít say goodbye.
              I donít know how Iíd live now,
              Without her by my side.
              SUCCESS is not final, FAILURE is not fatal; it is the courage to continue that counts


              • #8
                Lucy met a train,
                a train met Lucy
                The Train was juicy,
                the juice was Lucy.
                Doves, Playboys, Biscuits, Barrels, Callies, Clear Caps, China Whites, Rhubarbs, Loony Toons, New Yorkers... you know, bang on, larging it, the full monty, safe as houses, pair of trousers, what a laugh, let's do another half!


                • #9
                  Don't tell me that I'm beautiful
                  Until you've seen the marks
                  Etched on my skin
                  And the ones on the inside
                  On my heart
                  That I hide

                  Don't tell me that I'm strong
                  Until you've seen me break down
                  Fall apart
                  Time and time again
                  And cry until the tears no longer come

                  Don't tell me that I'm a wonderful person
                  Until I shut you out completely
                  And push you away
                  Because I promised myself
                  That you're just like the rest
                  And you'll get tired of me too

                  Don't tell me that I'm lovely
                  Until you've seen those nights that are like pure horror
                  And the terror that sometimes posses me
                  Seen me sob and tremble and question "why me?"
                  Until I run out of air
                  And collapse

                  Don't tell me that I'll get through this
                  That this is only temporary
                  Until you've seen the inner torment
                  Inside of my mind
                  And the demons that refuse
                  To be silent

                  But if you have seen that other part of me
                  The scars, pain, insecurities and bitterness
                  That I hide
                  The voices that whisper during the day
                  And scream during the night
                  The darkness lurking behind my smile
                  And you still stay by my side
                  Then maybe....just maybe.... I believe you....
                  You are enough


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