Very good, all in all. I've read about things that don't make sense but you'd have to be very nitpicky to be bothered by them.
What I don't get is why they let that guy act. It seems like he couldn't change his expression if his life depended on it.
"The exposure of truth sometimes results in tragedy... However! No matter how tragic the truth may be, it would be an even greater tragedy to avert one's eyes from it." ~Miles Edgeworth
If you don't like where you are, move. You are not a tree.
The truth of a proposition has nothing to do with its credibility, and vice versa.
I watched Practical Magic at the weekend. Fucking love that movie :D
...there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in.
'Franki is a wise one. Even if she hides it well sometimes' ~ Scary Monster
'that's because you're perfect Franki' ~ Broken-Angel
'I salute you Franki' ~ **helen**
'I agree with everything that Franki has said' ~ Melian
'You're a genius' ~ piccolo
'Franki's right as usual' ~ James