An interesting read

[ShyBoy]

It will take 1 - 2 hours but omg!

http://www.holyshiite.com/caver/page1.html

Do not read if you are of a nervous disposition.

[1983]

Wow! So that lad never came back, eh?

[Teh_Gerbil]

Good work of Fiction, I must say.

Shame it has some inconsistencies that ruin it just a little bit. Also, it is a stolen story:
http://www.neowin.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=151487&st=15
Original version found there, by original Author, made in 1987.

[ShyBoy]

Yes yes gerbil I looked it up too :p but it's very good nonetheless!

[WhenImYoung]

Wow! So that lad never came back, eh?

spoiler. i didn't get to that part yet!